Students Matter

Today was one of those glorious, exhausting teaching days; just what I needed to get my focus back on what really matters. 

Due to an unexpected interruption in my schedule, two of my Freshman Composition classes at the community college had essays due today. (I usually stagger the due dates).  Consequently, I had a full day of writing workshop helping over 60 students meet their first college writing deadline. 

Many of them have worked their way to this class through a gauntlet of English remediation courses, and all of them are nervous about this first assignment. Writing workshop in my classes is a cross between an internet cafe and a busy office. Three or four students are working on their laptops; others are writing with ink and paper. Some go back and forth from our second floor classroom to the available computers in the small library downstairs. Occasionally, students will pair off, quietly asking questions about their paper or getting last minute feedback on a draft. 

I sit at the edge of my desk/table near my own laptop, where I can keep our class Blackboard website and MS Word open.  Several of my students (some older adults, but some recently out of high school) do not know how to use word processing software. I get more savvy classmates to help some while I patiently show others how to setup double-spacing and explain for the third time why they don't have to hit Enter at the end of every line.  I have to do repeated tutorials on how to upload files into our class website since I require them to submit digital versions of their work. Many, if not most, of my students do not have computers and/or Internet access away from school, so deadline day finds them jamming the computer lab downstairs. I've noticed that those who have laptops don't share them; and I've only seen one student with an IPad all year.

In between the technical questions, students tentatively ask me about their drafts. Some bring hard copies, painstakingly written out; others insist on bringing a "clean" printed copy (which I've asked them not to do) because they don't want me to see their struggles. We've been working on these essays (I say we because I have been writing too) for over two weeks, but I was away for a week, and it's still early in the semester, so we haven't yet developed the trusting sharing that will come later. I can tell by their expressions and their body language that they are bracing themselves for what they expect me to say. Many hand me their work with their heads down, almost mumbling, "I know this probably isn't right, but could you look at it please..."  

Some are actually shocked when I start to ask them real questions about the content of their papers, and don't immediately start pointing out flaws; when I genuinely laugh at a well-turned phrase or sincerely ask about a revelation of personal pain or loss. There is a wave of shock, then relief when I announce that for this first essay, I do not have a required length nor will I deduct points for any grammatical error other than misspelled words ( I will, however, put marks in the margin of lines that contain other problems, which we'll address later). My goal with this first assignment is to draw them into the writer's world; to focus on development of an effective thesis; to wean them off the five-paragraph formula; and to encourage them to attempt some of the techniques they've admired in the model narratives we read together in preparation for this assignment. Of course, this is college and grades do matter. This first essay will be about 5% of their final grade. In the next essay, we'll add focus on some additional skills, and the penalty for poor writing will be higher with each assignment.  In between deadlines, however, they will be working on those individual areas of weakness that I've indicated in the margins and develop both fluency and technique as writers.

Most important, they will become more confident about expressing their own ideas in writing for academic and professional settings. I'm exhausted, and I still have almost 70 essays to which I must give meaningful response--in a relatively short turnaround. But I also have strongly mixed emotions because I know what's coming. At least a third of them, some semesters up to one-half, will not complete the course. Family problems, loss of babysitters, loss or change of jobs, poor health, frustration, and lingering self-doubt will dwindle the numbers. For those who persevere to the end of the course, I'm going to get a final portfolio of their work and a final exam essay that requires them to reflect over the semester and their own growth as writers. It will be some of the best writing they've ever done, and reviewing them will inevitably be a joyful, informative, and humbling experience for me. 

What a blessing.

In response to a question from Education Experts blog at National Journal.com where this is being cross-posted, I'm giving myself permission to repeat myself on this issue, yet again.

The disturbing revelations from recent Education Department reports could only surprise those who have chosen to ignore that unequal education is still a fact of American life 55 years after Brown vs. Board of Education. Need more proof?  An analysis by EdTrust also echoes what many teachers and parents of Title I schools have said for years, that “ budgeting practices in school districts across the country are shortchanging [poor] children and undermining federal investment in high-poverty schools…(April 2010, EdTrust).

For those who contend that poverty is irrelevant as a factor in whether U.S. children receive a quality public education, the truth is: America’s poor children are more likely to go to school in buildings that are poorly maintained, poorly equipped, poorly supplied, and poorly staffed. Many schools in high-poverty areas are not only visually depressing, but physically dangerous. How does a teacher convince a kid (or a parent whose child is) sitting in a leaking trailer or dodging falling plaster that we REALLY believe all children deserve a high quality education? What do such disparities say about the level of expectations the nation or the state (upon whom these schools rely for funding) has for the students and teachers who are there? What does it say about our nation that we are unwilling (not unable) to provide some of our children decent, safe school buildings?

Parents in high poverty communities see a constant rotation of administrators, and cycles of temporary, underprepared teaching staff for their children, but veteran, highly accomplished teachers for the children of those who have more? Why should they have to move themselves or their children to get access to those resources and teachers which are public and are proclaimed to be a way out of poverty?

There are millions of hard-working parents in poor urban and rural communities who did not finish school themselves, but desperately want their children to have a better life. Contrary to politically expedient myths, the majority of America’s poor families have always pushed their youngsters to pursue education as the best way not only to achieve individual goals, but also to help uplift the entire community. I submit that many parents in poor areas today appear to value education less because less value has clearly been placed on them and their children by the public education system. These attitudes are not born out of poverty; they are a reaction to what these disenfranchised parents and students correctly perceive as a string of broken promises.

The federal government could and should be playing a much stronger role in bringing an end to these disgraceful inequities, but while Congress fiddles, poor children continue to be underserved, and the dedicated educators who work with them continue to expend precious energies trying to make up for unnecessary gaps in resources and services.  Decades of lax monitoring and inadequate funding have thwarted the original intents of hard-won legal remedies such as Title I and IDEA.

For an excellent summary of what the Federal government could do, I recommend the Forum on Educational Accountability's February 2011 document: All Children Deserve an Opportunity to Learn.

I'm devoting a series of blogs to exploring some of the NBPTS standards, and challenging the myth that what constitutes good teaching is mystery.

My colleagues, members of the Teacher Leaders Network, and I have given the President's jobs plan mixed reviews. Generally, we felt the proposed bill is better than nothing, but not nearly enough.

Our best teachers are almost dangerously self-sacrificing, grossly underpaid, and frustratingly overly trained for what they are allowed to do.

Would treating underachieving students of color the way we do gifted and talented ones be a better and faster way to close the achievement gap?

It's the poverty of the school, not just of the students, that's keeping too many of our students from achieving at their highest potential.

Thanks to @SOSMarch for the tweet that led me to this wonderful message from the United Church of Christ giving a faith perspective on some of the most pressing issues in education today. Here's a slice: As people of faith...

Until we consistently produce true teacher- leaders, our working lives and conditions will remain at the whims those who don't pay the price or carry the responsibility of shaping children's lives.

This blog by Maureen Downey at the Atlanta Journal Constitution is the most insightful piece I've seen so far on the heartwrenching cheating scandal unfolding in Atlanta. Quoting an extensive interview with Jerry Eads who warns us that the problem is bigger and deeper than just this sad scenarion the article also points us toward thoughtful and effective solutions. Here's a taste:

NCLB and self-seekers (or worse) such as Hall, Augustine, Rhee and Paige didn’t start us down this path. The people who should be taken to task are not just those in the districts and schools who are ethically challenged but the policymakers who initiated minimum competency testing and the egregiously shortsighted “pass or perish” policies more than three decades ago – and those who continued them in the face of the overwhelming evidence that neither low-bid pass-fail testing nor punitive policy has had any positive effect on children’s education.

My Teacher Leader Network colleagues and I heartily agree. As we proposed in our recent book, Teaching 2030, it's past time for teachers to take charge of our profession. We should be establishing and enforcing standards of quality among our own ranks.

At the same time, political and educational leaders at all levels should be paying more attention to the mounting research affirming that there is more to creating a results-oriented teaching profession than overhauling teacher evaluation [important as that is] and judging individual teachers on the basis of how well their students performed on 20th-century standardized tests. 

For example, we now know that variations in school conditions may account for 25% of teacher effects on student learning (C.K. Jackson, Match quality, worker productivity, and worker mobility: Direct evidence from teachers. 2010). Add to that the evidence that peer learning among small groups of teachers (not individuals) seems to be the most powerful predictor of student achievement over time, and it becomes clearer that we can find more humane and more effective ways to measure, as well as improve, student learning and teacher performance.

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